looking good Karl - coming along nicely. It's nigh-on impossible to get the full gist of these on a screen, but they look nice to me. I like the contrast (pun intended) between the control print and the final version.
Only thing is I would have overexposed the first one by a good stop just to get a single good solid black ...
If you use exposure to control shadow tones with MG papers, you'll invariably end up with muddy mid tones and highlights unless you are certain that your negs are perfect for the particular contrast grade. the easiest approach is to use exposure to control the highlights then grade to control the shadows - you'll get there much quicker that way.
so - if printing a neg at grade 2,
- do a test strip looking at the highlights only and choose the time that gives the first hint of density in the most important highlight.
- Do a full print at this time and see how the shadows look - too light, change up a grade or two, too dark, change down a grade or two
- do a full print at the new contrast grade (same time as before unless moving up to g 4 or above then double the exposure time or halve if moving down from g 4 to a lower grade))
- check that the highlight tones are still correct - if too light, try adding 1/6 stop or if too dark, subtract 1/6 stop. and check that the shadows go down to minimal detail in the correct places and some hint of black. this will be the work print that shows the tonal range of the neg
- now work out all of your expressive stages = dodge and burn at will
and that is it.