"Or have I got this completely wrong?"
Yes. Sorry.
The fact is quite unknown that bright fresnel screens show a wrong (always bigger) depth of field compared to the final image. No matter if stopped down or not. Make a shot f.e. with a 1.4/50 lens wide open, focus at maybe 1 meter, compare the print with the "live" image on the screen. Only DSLR with live view will show the real dof. Every screen will show a bigger dof, the simple ground glass screens are closest to the final image, the bright screens are the worst in this regard.
Next, with slow telephoto lenses or other slow lenses the split image focus aid is completely useless, the microprisms are also often misleading, plain ground glass was always recommended by the manufacturers for telephoto, at least when they were offering different exchangeable screens. Of course they never said: don't trust our bright screens.
The first pictures I made with this homemade meniscus lens were unusable because the dof was shown much bigger on the camera screen, I was really shocked, see below. I added a smaller aperture made from cardbord and the images were usable. Getting a realitic impression of the final image still is delicate. A better, plain ground glass screen would surely help.